Space Whales [FINISHED]

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Re: Space Whales

Postby zer0jon » Sun May 26, 2013 12:37 am

Alright, got some kinks worked out as a result of proofreading/playtesting. So here it is!

The Void and The Hook
http://zer0games.com/games/voidandhook

This was a great opportunity to use Twine and to write a story that been in my head for a while! I highly enjoyed it. Thanks!

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Re: Space Whales

Postby Snuti » Sun May 26, 2013 2:13 pm

That was really catching story, took a little while to understand the context. When I was questioning what this was all about, the story told me. Just as it should be. Felt complete and well thought out. Spoiler: Wish Rankali and I could have had a happy ending. :P

Great work
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Re: Space Whales

Postby ZoeyFrost » Mon May 27, 2013 12:18 am

Wow, this is incredible! Great work.
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Re: Space Whales

Postby AnomalousUnderdog » Wed May 29, 2013 2:04 am

Depressing! On the merits of the writing, it is well made. I'm just not the target audience for this.
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Re: Space Whales

Postby zer0jon » Wed May 29, 2013 2:44 am

Thanks for the comments! I'm still amazed when anyone plays something I make, much less takes the time to comment on it, much less says something nice about it :)

Unfortunately, yes, most of the stuff kicking around in my head ends up depressing. That's why it feels good to get it out, right? :D
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Re: Space Whales

Postby AnomalousUnderdog » Wed May 29, 2013 12:57 pm

Well, just wanted to share my personal take on it: It's something I've already moved on from. Not something I want to relive...

But I agree as a writer it does feel good to write it down.
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Re: Space Whales

Postby d_durham » Wed May 29, 2013 2:23 pm

Really enjoyed this - it was very compelling. Very well done.
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